Tuesday, March 26, 2013

Rhetorical Analysis Paper - Rough Draft



            In his 2011 article “Believe Me, It’s Torture,” Christopher Hitchens details his traumatizing experience as a willing victim of water boarding. A controversial topic, Hitchens explicates the negative impact of the technique by recounting his own exposure to the torture method. Throughout his article, Hitchens successfully utilizes the rhetorical devices pathos, logos, and ethos to expose the grim nature of water boarding and to denounce its use by our nation.
            Hitchens hooks most of his readers with his skilled use of pathos, also known as an appeal to emotions. The full article is sprinkled with diction such as “flail,” “lashed,” “darkness,” and “gasping,” setting an uneasy tone to the piece overall. Hitchens’ proficient use of language allows the reader to experience just what he had experienced, drawing on our fears by relating his experience water boarding with the torture scene in 1984, in which you are forced to confront what you personally believed to be “the worst thing in the world.” This strong use of language forces the reader to feel sympathy for Hitchens, almost pleading with him not to go through with such an arduous task. However, Hitchens pursues his ambition, and is immediately plunged into a horrifying circumstance. He describes himself as having “fought down the first, and some of the second, wave of nausea and terror but soon found that I was an abject prisoner to my gag reflex.”
            Logos, or an appeal to logic, is similarly weaved throughout the piece, expertly placed in just the right ways so as to force the reader to re-evaluate what they are reading. Hitchens informs us that water boarding is not a simulation of torture: “You feel that you are drowning because you are drowning – or, rather, being drowned, albeit slowly and under controlled conditions and at the mercy (or otherwise) of those who are applying the pressure.” In reference to the safety waver he had to sign before undergoing this activity, this heightens the idea that death is very much possible from this technique. Although it leaves no physical markings on the body, it is still very painful and can harm one internally. In addition, Hitchens is concerned after realizing that he is unable to recall the exact events that occurred while the cloth was over his face. He believes that he had spoken the safe-word previously agreed upon, but instead had just gone limp in a state that signals the onset of unconsciousness. He ponders that “now I have to wonder about the role of false memory and delusion.” He later sums up this point by stating that “[water boarding] may be a means of extracting information, but it is also a means of extracting junk information.” When put in this vastly terrifying position, you will say absolutely anything to stop the torture. However, this may end up being the opposite of helpful, especially if they are wrongfully captured and truly don’t have any information to give.
            The final technique utilized by Hitchens is ethos, or an appeal to ethics. The first paragraph of his article begins with his statement that water boarding was “something that Americans were being trained to resist, not to inflict.” By stating the terms as such, it forces the reader to understand that we are trying to protect ourselves from this type of harm from other countries. Therefore, why would we pass along this torture method and perform it on enemies of our own? He later goes on to say that, under the same terms that Abraham Lincoln viewed slavery, “If water boarding does not constitute torture, then there is no such thing as torture.”
            In closing, Hitchens is able to successfully utilize rhetorical devices in order to demonstrate the shortcomings of water boarding as a torture technique. Hopefully one day our nation will truly take these thoughts and ideas into serious consideration, and then our nation will be a better place.

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